Our Star of the Week has been amazing this week. He has demonstrated wonderful behaviour and fantastic effort across all subjects, and his writing has been great. Check out a few sentences from his ‘Man on the Moon’ story. Can you tell we have been working on subordinate clauses?

One morning, I was getting ready for a mission. I was so excited for it that I was dancing about.

I ran over a rock so I was scared. When I got out of my car, I saw what it was. I moved it because it nearly popped my tyre. 


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